Crit Feedback:

Strengths:

Great Proposal - The proposal for the moon illusion is the element, The concept is very clever and directly relates to the subject (The proposal) 
Effective use of imagery
Great uniform design
Great concept behind the design
Great colour choice doesn't fit one gender
Logo is very well designed and placement on each product is great
Poster shape is relevant to the subject
Type and grid, layout works vey well minimalist and text easy to find.
Not gender specific - widening the rage of viewers.

Areas for Improvement:

The proposal could be reflected more within the design of the flyer and poster as this is the strongest element. Perhaps use the phrase 'Take one small step' Next to the moon' to clarify the concept.
maybe combining the colour blue with the red would give the design a patriotic feel.
Take into consideration what the proposal will be made from, then if more effective make the whole set of designs this material, acrylic flyer not economical however very modern.
Type could be placed better on the flyer
Design apeals to males only,

Personal thoughts:
I believe that i could improve the type size on the flyer as this is sadly un readable

Questions i generated on areas i want feedback on:

1: Does the whole set communicate the message? Is there any improvements i could make to enhance this communication?

2:  Does my design proposal communicate what the piece actually is and what its purpose is?

3: Is my choice of colour Effective?

4: Is the format of the design effective if not why and how could i improve this?

5: Does the design appeal to a wide range of viewers or does it appeal to one gender?

6: Do my designs achieve their purpose?

7: Do my designs maintain a strong hierarchy making the design readable and legible?

Recurring Comments within the group:

Great Clarity
Effective Type
Questions and discussion - Context
Relevant Colour/Image
Origionality of format
Range does it work
Relevant text
Correct spelling and grammar
Composition
Originality of a design

Overall my crit feed back was very possotive the event and message i intended to communicate was effective and many of the areas of improvement are simple tasks that can be amended in a few minuites.